Girls and sons: a revision proposal and meeting of minds

[Hulkotron]

Friends,

The classic "girls and sons" post has some unfortunate errors in grammar, formatting, and spelling.  I would like to propose a revision.  

Below is the original post:

Girls and sons who have not been loved by their fathers seek attention once teens and adults to compensate for what they didn't have originally. Fathers either left them alone, or were distant most of the time and not encouraging them.

Some even despised them which would shape their personality and the way they they interact with others for the rest of their life.
They are extremistic in everything they do, always looking exaggeratly for attention (Hello Goodrum), and have troubles adapting to society's rules, because they also have troubles defining their own identity and respecting authority and hierarchy.

Also boys who got picked on by others during childhood and adolescence -often sons without a father figure- try to compensate by lifting weights, to develop muscles and survive in ther male world.
They're insecure because they're girly, childish, feminine having been raised by a single mom.
They lift obsessively hoping it will transform them into men, to compensate for their lack of influence from a father figure that was not there. Unfortunaltey they can get as big as they can it doesnt cure their insecurity and who they truly are, how they grew up being raised by a single mom. They re no as manly as other men whatever they do, and they often have a big lack of masculine presence they dont know how to balance, hence often being borderline homosexuals while trying to get their manhood back thru various manly activities (mma, cars, weight lifting etc).

They are often the ones that, in order to get respect from other males will go the steroids route to get even "bigger" attemptint to cure their insecurity , but being natural not being "enough", they still feel "too small", insecure, amongst other males. The lack of a father figure also often means they didnt have guidance to continue studies and are often working shitty manual jobs.

Here is my proposed revision:

Girls and sons who have not been loved by their fathers seek attention once teens and adults to compensate for what they didn't have originally. Fathers either left them alone, or were distant most of the time and not encouraging them. Some even despised them which would shape their personality and the way they interact with others for the rest of their life. They are extremistic in everything they do, always looking exaggeratly for attention (Hello Goodrum), and have troubles adapting to society's rules, because they also have troubles defining their own identity and respecting authority and hierarchy.

Also boys who got picked on by others during childhood and adolescence -often sons without a father figure- try to compensate by lifting weights, to develop muscles and survive in ther male world. They're insecure because they're girly, childish, feminine having been raised by a single mom. They lift obsessively hoping it will transform them into men, to compensate for their lack of influence from a father figure that was not there. Unfortunately they can get as big as they can but it doesn't cure their insecurity and who they truly are, how they grew up being raised by a single mom. They're not as manly as other men whatever they do, and they often have a big lack of masculine presence they don't know how to balance, hence often being borderline homosexuals while trying to get their manhood back through various manly activities (MMA, cars, weight lifting etc.).

They are often the ones that, in order to get respect from other males, will go the steroids route to get even "bigger", attempting to cure their insecurity, but being natural not being "enough", they still feel "too small", insecure, amongst other males. The lack of a father figure also often means they didn't have guidance to continue studies and are often working shitty manual jobs.

This issue is currently open for comment/discussion.

Thank-you,
Hulkotron, BS, MS, PhD, FGB, OOTBGAH

[el numero uno]

Did Uberman commit suicide?

[Sokolsky]

Friends,

The classic "girls and sons" post has some unfortunate errors in grammar, formatting, and spelling.  I would like to propose a revision.  

Below is the original post:

Here is my proposed revision:

This issue is currently open for comment/discussion.

Thank-you,
Hulkotron, BS, MS, PhD, FGB, OOTBGAH

Dear Hulkotron, BS, MS, PhD, FGB, OOTBGAH,

Would you be so kind as to put highlights for the altered sections so I don't need to read through the entire wall of text?

Kind regards,

[Grape Ape]

Hulkotron providing immense value in this thread.

Would gladly offer the position of official Getbig Records Integrity Boss, complimenting ND who manages all digital assets.

[SuperTed]

Did Uberman commit suicide?

I'm sure he'll make his triumphant return to these boards one day. I miss his morbid opinions and comments.

[Grape Ape]

I'm sure he'll make his triumphant return to these boards one day. I miss his morbid opinions and comments.

He posts under the name "Julio Caesar" these days.

[SuperTed]

He posts under the name "Julio Caesar" these days.

Not the same guy imo. Julio is a Swedish hedonist who fucks trannies, uberman was a French/Canadian nihilist who was married with a daughter. They occasionally have a similar writing style but that seems more because English isn't their first language.

[Henda]

Did Uberman commit suicide?

I think he was too poor to afford internet and was posting from his local library which then closed preventing him posting.

Maybe I'm remembering wrong or it's someone else but I'm pretty sure that's what happened

[El Diablo Blanco]

What the fuck man?  Do you think you can go back and add a few notes to a Mozart symphony or add a few touches to the Mona Lisa or correct Shakespear?

Don't touch a fucking classic.

[Kahn.N.Singh]

Love it, Hulkotron.

But, in the spirit of Jorge Luis Borges' "Pierre Menard, Author of the Quixote," it is neither a revision nor a duplicate, but is a new work in itself.

If I ever refer to this new work, it will be as: "Girls and Sons" by Hulkotron.

[Parker]

I'm sure he'll make his triumphant return to these boards one day. I miss his morbid opinions and comments.

It was Deciede (sp) who was morbid. His musings on coffee and how it effects the evacuation of ideas among other things was quite, uh interesting.

[Hulkotron]

Love it, Hulkotron.

But, in the spirit of Jorge Luis Borges' "Pierre Menard, Author of the Quixote," it is neither a revision nor a duplicate, but is a new work in itself.

If I ever refer to this new work, it will be as: "Girls and Sons" by Hulkotron.

Thank you my friend

What the fuck man?  Do you think you can go back and add a few notes to a Mozart symphony or add a few touches to the Mona Lisa or correct Shakespear?

Don't touch a fucking classic.

Please moderate your tone.

[cephissus]

wish ube would grace us once more

[HockeyFightFan]

Friends,

The classic "girls and sons" post has some unfortunate errors in grammar, formatting, and spelling.  I would like to propose a revision.  

Below is the original post:

Here is my proposed revision:

This issue is currently open for comment/discussion.

Thank-you,
Hulkotron, BS, MS, PhD, FGB, OOTBGAH

Post it using "Track Changes" for chrissakes!

[Shakespeare]

What the fuck man?  Do you think you can go back and add a few notes to a Mozart symphony or add a few touches to the Mona Lisa or correct Shakespear?

Don't touch a fucking classic.

Hulkotron is thine candle. Look how far that little candle throws his beams! So shines a good deed in a weary world.