Parts of it are fine…but other parts are not.
The Mr. and Mrs. overhead sign has errors on it. There should be periods after Mr. and Mrs. abbreviations. That whole sign doesn’t really read smoothly.
The “Keep Out” and skeleton posters look cool. It’s just that when compared to all the bigger decorations, they seem a bit cheap.
I don’t get why you have the Star Wars decorations mixed in with the scary stuff. That’s fine if you’re a Star Wars fan; but it does not make any sense to have that mixed in with scary items. Your display should have been fully scary. I feel the addition of the Star Wars makes it odd. And what’s with the bizarre tape recorder sounds of the Storm Trooper? What is Darth Vader holding? This is also not needed.
I also did not see many tall decorations, if any. That’s not good.
The Skeleton with the headphones was good. And the items on your roof were good.
You just have too many different themes all jumbled together. It doesn’t flow.