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Re: New Gym Sitcom test trailer!
« Reply #25 on: April 07, 2009, 08:38:11 PM »
good premise.... but the first half of that trailer is pretty slow, I would re-edit it, and the chemistry between the owner and the yoga instructor is not coming across and that is pretty crucial...also tell your actors that acting is not about doing canned line readings...they need to learn their Actions...get them into some Miesner classes...they are not working off each other...if you ever got picked up, they would all get fired.

btw the gay partner joke was pretty funny, never heard that one before.

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Re: New Gym Sitcom test trailer!
« Reply #26 on: April 07, 2009, 08:39:03 PM »
ok...
No doubt about it...

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Re: New Gym Sitcom test trailer!
« Reply #27 on: April 07, 2009, 08:43:32 PM »
im sorry man im not liking it
i think the idea is great but the actors are horrible...they seem to rigid and like theyre reading from cue cards

i like the gay asian and the hersehel guy-i dont like anyone else

u need to include people from getbig on here...the characters on this sire would be great for the show
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Re: New Gym Sitcom test trailer!
« Reply #28 on: April 07, 2009, 09:58:46 PM »
Jericho was great, none of the other characters held my interest at all.
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Re: New Gym Sitcom test trailer!
« Reply #29 on: April 07, 2009, 10:13:14 PM »
has potential fire everyone involved in audio unless the editor decided to add his own controls and mixes that turned the music / voice into junk

but other than that its impressive and gives a clear idea of what this is and a great mix of stuff

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Re: New Gym Sitcom test trailer!
« Reply #30 on: April 08, 2009, 01:27:11 AM »
If you want to make the show great you have to have good writing,  I think for your first episode you guys should bludgeon an asian prostitute and hijinks would occur trying to dispose of her body.  Americans like stuff that's real.

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Re: New Gym Sitcom test trailer!
« Reply #31 on: April 08, 2009, 02:27:20 AM »
Funny thing is i pitched the Gym Sitcom idea to NBC, i just wrote them an email about a year ago, i said i want it to be like the sitcom "The Office" but put it in a gym setting.  I never herd back! lol.   I think eventually NBC or will come out with a sitcom like this, sad thing is they'll develop it themselves and wont take your idea, saves them money.  Or they'll find better writers etc..   The gym is filled with drama and would make for a great sitcom I'm surprised theres not one out yet already.  You have to realize the that the majority of people that sit at home at 8pm are fat lazy un healthy people, and i don't know if they would be into watching a bunch of in shape good looking people work out etc.. but who knows.

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Re: New Gym Sitcom test trailer!
« Reply #32 on: April 08, 2009, 03:47:31 AM »
Finally a show that gets right to the heart of the human condition.  ::)

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Re: New Gym Sitcom test trailer!
« Reply #33 on: April 08, 2009, 04:13:51 AM »
Its a great idea. That fat guy will be sure to be a star!

You also need to add a black character (although Cheers didn't have any black guys in it did it???)

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Re: New Gym Sitcom test trailer!
« Reply #34 on: April 08, 2009, 10:55:28 AM »
pretty bad , you need some real actors, and better looking people. but ya never know this drek could be the next hit. no accounting for taste.
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