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Roger Bacon

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What do you think of this?
« on: January 12, 2012, 02:18:56 AM »
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Re: What do you think of this?
« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2012, 12:13:25 PM »
Tries too hard on body language - maybe he's trying to make Matt Hamill understand the virtues of light sparring?
Overall it sounds nice.
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Re: What do you think of this?
« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2012, 07:33:45 AM »
It's pretty good.  While I'd change a few of his lines I agree w/his point.
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