I watched it from a professional standpoint and here are my critiques
1. It was boring - Low energy and no interesting interactions with people. This is what I eat. This is where I played basketball. This is where I worked out. The interaction in the gym was forced and not fun. He's a business owner so they should have had some shots of him running his company and being a Company President if he doesn't want to come across as a meathead.
2. Not Likeable - He did not make the audience want to get to know him more. We didn't find out what made him tick or makes him special. I think he tried very hard not to come across as not a meathead and this is all a stepping stone which is fine but he didn't make me want to know more.
3. Not Authentic -Seemed pretty phony. Comes across as pretentious and disingenuous. Very articulate but doesn't connect.