Ok man you need toi be real here jclopez. Your design of a cover is NOT appealing.
Whiter than cool whip women aren't good. You wan't tan hotties.
The magazine looks amateur as they come man you really need to do something about that. I mean, it looks like a cheap photoshop a getbigger did.
I mean no hate, just try to do better than that. I bet 240 could do a great job, consult him maybe? He has awesome website, surely he could design a magazine cover?
I'd never even skim through a magazine in a store that has such poor design on the cover. Work on it.