i don't think its that bad, you should see some of the others!, they can even pose right and look like they're going to fall over!. For working on my routine for like 5 min after i got home free prejudgings i did ok 
so you prep for a contest by taking loads of drugs, spend hours and hours in the gym (only training upper body) and on getbig, diet through hell and then waste all that effort by spending 5 mins on a "routine"?
and yet you call it a routine?
seriously Matt, your upper body looks great, your legs look like a schoolgirls...its literally ruining anything you've got up top.
then the routine...omg. you make Paul Dillett look choreographed.
what the hell is that bicep curl thing you did in between "poses"?...
you gotta not copy other guys, go easy on the stupid "transitions" with those flarey exaggerated hand movements, but move from pose to post with purpose, hit them on beats (use a song that actually inspires not some ghetto crack beat), and work the routine to a crescendo...dont do the money poses straight up..the audience gets bored..you gotta keep them waiting and interested.
dont get me wrong, pros pose like crap mostly, but you can make up some decent ground over someone slightly better than you with a kick ass routine.
but, even with a great routine, you will find it hard to win with pencil legs.
for ultimate posing checkout lee labrada. he's the best theres ever been. Dont copy him, but watch the subtleties and the presentation.
also, dont look at yourself when posing..so many guys do that and it makes me wonder what they are looking at...can they not look at themselves for 5 minutes?
hope this helps.
Ps steve namat is correct.
