Got my first possible online training client (only non blocked members reply)

[dj181]

And I sent them this post

I can give you a free consultation phone call on WhatsApp to tell you my methods and if you agree I can develop a diet and training program for you but this program won't be free. But the consultation call will be free.

Is this good business etiquette?

Need you business tycoons to give some feedback

[IroNat]

Tell them how fat you are.

[dj181]

You're a blocked shitnat

I'm only looking for insightful input on my method and how to improve it

Not your critical shit talk

[Never1AShow]

How is this a client if he’s just now telling him it costs money (and not even the price)?

Seems to be putting the potatoes ahead of the stew.

[AbrahamG]

Use the charm DJ and knock this out of the park.

[Coach is Back!]

I'm down to 34 online clients. I let over 20 go because I got too busy with other businesses

[Tennisballz]

Jason Blaha has clients and you only look a little worse than him so you should be fine.

[dj181]

Use the charm DJ and knock this out of the park.

Its a women by the way

Of course these fucking scum would claim I would rape her

Fuck them to hell

[dj181]

I'm down to 34 online clients. I let over 20 go because I got too busy with other businesses

But does that reply seem fine?

[dj181]

Jason Blaha has clients and you only look a little worse than him so you should be fine.

Nah

He looks a shitton better then me

[Grape Ape]

But does that reply seem fine?

I think it was too wordy.

But I'm not an English teacher like you.

[dj181]

I think it was too wordy.

But I'm not an English teacher like you.

Really?

Guess I should have asked my good buddy ai for feedback

[Grape Ape]

Really?

Guess I should have asked my good buddy ai for feedback

You say the consultation is free twice.

"I can meet for a free consultation to discuss methods on WhatsApp, but any subsequent diet and exercise plans will come with a fee".

[dj181]

You say the consultation is free twice.

"I can meet for a free consultation to discuss methods on WhatsApp, but any subsequent diet and exercise plans will come with a fee".

Yeah I need to explain my methods and theories to see if peeps will be down with it

I'm rather detailed and I do not give cookie cutter routines like most shitstainns do

[Hulkotron]

You say the consultation is free twice.

"I can meet for a free consultation to discuss methods on WhatsApp, but any subsequent diet and exercise plans will come with a fee".

This is much better.

"won't be free" sounds like a scam.

[dj181]

This is much better.

"won't be free" sounds like a scam.

Thanks dude I'll use that as my stock reply from here on out

[CalorieKing]

says he blocks people, including me, comes into my training log thread and posts and replies quoting me 

[dj181]

This one form ai is very nice ill use it


I can offer you a complimentary WhatsApp consultation where I’ll explain my unique methods and how I help clients achieve their best results. After the call, if you decide to work with me, I can create a fully personalized diet and training program tailored specifically for you. The program is paid, but the consultation itself is completely free.

[IroNat]

You're a blocked shitnat

I'm only looking for insightful input on my method and how to improve it

Not your critical shit talk

Just trying to help.

[CalorieKing]

Just trying to help.

Blockeddddd 

[BB]

This one form ai is very nice ill use it


I can offer you a complimentary WhatsApp consultation where I’ll explain my unique methods and how I help clients achieve their best results. After the call, if you decide to work with me, I can create a fully personalized diet and training program tailored specifically for you. The program is paid, but the consultation itself is completely free.

"The program is paid" - change that to "The program costs a small fee".  You could also spice it up with the term "gratis" for the term free, but not "free, gratis", because that would be redundant.

[dj181]

"The program is paid" - change that to "The program costs a small fee".  You could also spice it up with the term "gratis" for the term free, but not "free, gratis", because that would be redundant.

Great

Thanks brother

Will.do so

[webstar]

Show them your training videos lolol

[dj181]

Here's the new and revised one

I can offer you a complimentary WhatsApp consultation where I’ll explain my unique methods and how I help clients achieve their best results. After the call, if you decide to work with me, I will create a fully personalized diet and training program tailored specifically for you. My diet and training program will cost a small but very affordable fee, and of course the consultation itself will be completely free of charge.

Cant sleep due to the.excitement from my beautiful DECA so I will drink some coffees made of milk and film my slo mo pull-up for choas

[NaturalWonder83]

Good luck

I think your into above sounds good