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Realest? Is that actually a word?
Some other suggestions...
From your site:
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1. NutritionistS
2. $ followed by the word "dollar" is redundant.
3. However,
4. Maybe try "financially viable"...no matter how expensive something is, if money is involved, it IS a financial option, even if it is a bad one.
5. If the sentence starts with the word "why", it should end with a question mark. This is a question mark....?
6. A forms??? How about "a form" or "the forms"?
7. Joe...capital "J". Proper nouns and all...
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Idiot.
