Do I have potential as a YouTuber? Honest feedback wanted

[webstar]

You’re right, the laughter part did come across a bit forced. Truth is, right before filming when I actually went for a real number two, I laughed so hard I had tears in my eyes. In the video I had to act it out, so it ended up looking a bit staged. At least I’m glad you found something good in there.

Does your undershirt bunch up?

[Sandrock]

I watched bits and pieces and thought it fucking sucked and I'm off to the Hankins thread to wash this shit away.

[Never1AShow]

Great first video! I like it! I think you definitely should continue make youtube-vids.

Also, i would love to have your feedback on one of my Strategy-videos here, which i made 15 years ago specifically for Getbig.

Fucking love Starcraft and the Protoss

[Lartinos]

If this video was meant to be funny it failed and if it meant to be informative it failed too.

A nonsensical 39 minute unprofessional “review” is hard to comprehend who this was made for other than you.

Try making it 5-10 minutes long where it tells useful and interesting facts.
Teaches people and is funny for its substance, you like odd facts or irony etc.

Find a good lead in image and a click bait title.