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Jimmy L

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Can you guys please critique my workout?
« on: July 19, 2007, 12:29:55 AM »
I am 27 years old. I am 6' 245 with alot of ody fat. I am all natural (no anabolic androgenic steroids or human growth hormone - somatropin - ). A few weeks from now I plan on returning to weightlifting after a long layoff. I will do a four day a week split (mon,tues,thurs,fri) and I will run on the treadmill weds. and sat. I will do 7 exercises a session and 3 sets for every exercise using reps of 12,10,8 increasing the weight each set. I will change up the exercises every 3-4 weeks or however long I see fit. Below you will see my workout plan. From the list of exercise choices I will make one letter selection (ex. either a,b,c, or d).

Four days a week

Day 1 Mon.

1. a) Seated cable rows (using v-bar or underhand straight bar)
b) Neutral grip bent over one arm dumbbell rows 12,10,8

2. For exercise #2 I will either focus on my upper back using:
a) Seated cable rows to neck using rope 12,10,8
b) Overhand bent over one arm dumbbell rows 12,10,8

Or I will focus on my serratus using:
c) Rope pulls
d) Lever pullovers
e) Straight arm lat pulldowns

3. a) Close grip lat pulldowns 12,10,8
b) Underhand lat pulldowns 12,10,8

4. a) Wide grip lat pulldowns (using long straight bar or d-hooks bar) 12,10,8

5. a) Standing cable external rotation (with towel roll under arm pit) 12,10,8

6. a) Barbell hammer curls 12,10,8
b) Seated hammer curls 12,10,8
c) Medium grip standing reverse curls (using ez bar) 12,10,8
d) Medium grip reverse preacher curls (using ez bar) 12,10,8

7. a) Medium grip standing straight bar curls 12,10,8
b) Medium grip straight bar preacher curls 12,10,8
c) Seated dumbbell curls 12,10,8

Day 2 Tues.

1. a) Flat barbell bench press 12,10,8
b) Flat dumbbell bench press 12,10,8

2. a) Incline barbell bench press 12,10,8
b) Incline dumbbell bench press 12,10,8

3. a) Neutral grip flat dumbbell serratus punches 12,10,8

4. a) Pec deck flys 12,10,8
b) Seated lever flys 12,10,8

5. a) Standing cable internal rotation (with towel roll under arm pit) 12,10,8

6. a) Tricep pushdowns (using either v-bar, rope, overhand straight bar or underhand straight bar) 12,10,8

7. a) 4 way neck machine 12,10,8

Weds.

Walk/run on treadmill for 30 minutes

Day 3 Thurs.

1. a) Squats 12,10,8

2. a) Leg extensions 12,10,8

3. a) Lying leg curls 12,10,8
b) Seated leg curls 12,10,8

4. a) Reverse hyper-extensions 12,10,8

5. a) Standing calve raises 12,10,8
b) Seated calve raises 12,10,8

6. a) Ab crunch machine 12,10,8

7. a) Oblique twist machine 12,10,8

Day 4 Fri.

1. a) Seated overhead barbell press 12,10,8
b) Seated overhead dumbbell press 12,10,8

2. a) Standing front barbell raises 12,10,8
b) Seated front dumbbell raises (overhand grip or neutral grip) 12,10,8

3. a) Medium grip barbell upright rows 12,10,8
b) Seated dumbbell lateral raises 12,10,8
c) Lever 'L' lateral raises 12,10,8

4. a) Seated dumbbell scaption raises (full cans hands at 10 and 2 o'clock) 12,10,8

5. a) Seated lever reverse flys (vertical grip) 12,10,8
b) Standing reverse flys 12,10,8

6. a) Seated dumbell upright external rotation (with foam horn) 12,10,8

7. a) Barbell shrugs (straight bar with straps when needed) 12,10,8
b) Neutral grip seated dumbbell shrugs (with straps when needed) 12,10,8

Sat.

Walk/run on treadmill for 30 minutes

Sun.

OFF

What do you guys think? Is this a good workout plan? Am I doing enough? Am I doing too much? Will this lead to over training? Should I be doing more? Any feed back would be greatly appreciated.

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Re: Can you guys please critique my workout?
« Reply #1 on: July 19, 2007, 07:13:15 AM »
in my opinion, and again it's only MY opinion, i think you might be over doing it if you're just getting back into the game. i'd start out doing 3 sets of 10 each of a light weight for a few weeks before you dive in full force. I feel that your reps are too high as well if you're not going to go on "The Sh*t" otherwise you'll overtrain for sure. I would drop your reps to a 10-8-6 or 8-8-8 and only do 3-4 excercises per body part. For the major muscle groups I'd do 4 exercises and the smaller one's I'd shoot for only 3. I'd also concentrate on doing compound movements to hit multiple muscle groups instead of doing isolation excersises.

For cardio, if you really want to lose your fat, I'd hit the treadmill, precor or stairmaster right away in the morning for 30+ mins on an empty stomach and then hit the weights in the evening if you have the time to do all that.

just me 2 cents.

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Re: Can you guys please critique my workout?
« Reply #2 on: July 19, 2007, 07:16:03 AM »
in my opinion, and again it's only MY opinion, i think you might be over doing it if you're just getting back into the game.

I was thinking the same thing.

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Re: Can you guys please critique my workout?
« Reply #3 on: July 19, 2007, 07:33:45 AM »
quick thougt and this is just from looking at it real quick...why have specific movements for your seratus at this time? 
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Re: Can you guys please critique my workout?
« Reply #4 on: July 19, 2007, 12:46:31 PM »
I was thinking the same thing.

exactly, pick two exercises per body part, do 3-4 work sets for each, and you're done

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Re: Can you guys please critique my workout?
« Reply #5 on: July 20, 2007, 01:18:37 AM »
Thanks fellas.

Anyone else?

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Re: Can you guys please critique my workout?
« Reply #6 on: July 20, 2007, 02:25:50 AM »
To many exercises , go with 2 exercises for body part

like this

1. pull up 8x3

2. DB rows 3x8


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Re: Can you guys please critique my workout?
« Reply #7 on: July 20, 2007, 09:09:29 AM »
You might be over thinking your returning workout scheme. Always a good idea to plan things out (and keep a workout log) but try not making it space science at first. If you must split, than have a split for the upper and lower body during the week. First 2 or 3 weeks do only one exercise per body part of 3X10-12 reps. Get a feel and rhythm going for future exercise patterns. Do not let over enthusiasm set yourself up for an early burnout with regards to working out. Too much, too soon has been the down fall for many trainee's.

Might try:

Upper body

bench
military BB press
upright row
BB row
French press
BB curl

This gives 3 push and 3 pull exercises. This might seem too simple for you, but that's what you want at first. Your not only training the muscles but the all important CNS also. Getting the body accustomed to future , more intense workouts.

Lower body

Squat (total legs/hips/butt)
BB Hack squats ...hells raised on a 2"X4" or BB plates... (focus manly on quads)
Leg curls..standing preferred
Calf

Same 3X10-12rep scheme. Throw in ab's after each workout. No need for marathon sets and rep's with ab's. Follow the 3X10-12 pattern. Try an Ab Wheel if you have one handy.

Good Luck.
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I changed it up, how does this look?
« Reply #8 on: July 22, 2007, 02:02:30 PM »
Is this any better?:

Four days a week

Day 1 Mon.

1. a) Seated cable rows (using v-bar or underhand straight bar)
b) Neutral grip bent over one arm dumbbell rows 12,10,8

2. a) Seated cable rows to neck using rope 12,10,8
b) Overhand bent over one arm dumbbell rows 12,10,8

3. a) Close grip lat pulldowns 12,10,8
b) Underhand lat pulldowns 12,10,8

4. a) Wide grip lat pulldowns (using long straight bar or d-hooks bar) 12,10,8

5. a) Medium grip standing straight bar curls 12,10,8
b) Medium grip straight bar preacher curls 12,10,8
c) Seated dumbbell curls 12,10,8

6. a) Barbell hammer curls 12,10,8
b) Seated hammer curls 12,10,8
c) Medium grip standing reverse curls (using ez bar) 12,10,8
d) Medium grip reverse preacher curls (using ez bar) 12,10,8

Day 2 Tues.

1. a) Flat barbell bench press 12,10,8
b) Flat dumbbell bench press 12,10,8

2. a) Incline barbell bench press 12,10,8
b) Incline dumbbell bench press 12,10,8

3. a) Pec deck flys 12,10,8
b) Seated lever flys 12,10,8

4. a) Tricep pushdowns (using either v-bar, rope, overhand straight bar or underhand straight bar) 12,10,8

5. a) 4 way neck machine 12,10,8

Weds.

Walk/run on treadmill for 30 minutes

Day 3 Thurs.

1. a) Squats 12,10,8

2. a) Leg extensions 12,10,8

3. a) Lying leg curls 12,10,8
b) Seated leg curls 12,10,8

4. a) Standing calve raises 12,10,8
b) Seated calve raises 12,10,8

5. a) Ab crunch machine 12,10,8

6. a) Oblique twist machine 12,10,8

Day 4 Fri.

1. a) Seated overhead barbell press 12,10,8
b) Seated overhead dumbbell press 12,10,8

2. a) Standing front barbell raises 12,10,8
b) Seated front dumbbell raises (overhand grip or neutral grip) 12,10,8

3. a) Medium grip barbell upright rows 12,10,8
b) Seated dumbbell lateral raises 12,10,8
c) Lever 'L' lateral raises 12,10,8

4. a) Seated lever reverse flys (vertical grip) 12,10,8
b) Standing reverse flys 12,10,8

5. a) Barbell shrugs (straight bar with straps when needed) 12,10,8
b) Neutral grip seated dumbbell shrugs (with straps when needed) 12,10,8

Sat.

Walk/run on treadmill for 30 minutes

Sun.

OFF

What do you guys think? Is this any better?