Author Topic: Grammar experts - you ass in this thread now (Read 3390 times)

Papper · « **on:** July 08, 2011, 01:42:19 AM »

If you are to describe that an area contains something. And the area is a couple of blocks. How do you say it correctly:

"In just a few blocks you'll find all the top bodybuilding gyms"

"Over just a few blocks you'll find all the top bodybuilding gyms"

Any english speakers who want to clear this up?

.. Oh and Kai Greene is a renowned grammar artist using all the big words he can possibly think of in any given sentence, so now this is bodybuilding related.

Cleanest Natural · « **Reply #1 on:** July 08, 2011, 01:43:51 AM »

I would say "Over ..." is correct

Papper · « **Reply #2 on:** July 08, 2011, 01:44:57 AM »

Quote from: Cleanest Natural on July 08, 2011, 01:43:51 AM

I would say "Over ..." is correct

Thanks!

muscularny · « **Reply #3 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:13:15 AM »

you can also use the word nearby

jedibrat · « **Reply #4 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:14:16 AM »

Quote from: Cleanest Natural on July 08, 2011, 01:43:51 AM

I would say "Over ..." is correct

"Over ..." sounds like the gyms are floating. Preferable would be:

"you'll find all the top bodybuilding gyms in just a few blocks"

kiwiol · « **Reply #5 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:19:28 AM »

All the top bodybuilding gyms are just a few blocks away

Army of One · « **Reply #6 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:26:59 AM »

The Unemployment rate is highest in these blocks

kiwiol · « **Reply #7 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:33:25 AM »

Quote from: Army of One on July 08, 2011, 02:26:59 AM

The Unemployment rate is highest in these blocks

lmao!

w8m8 · « **Reply #8 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:34:14 AM »

Quote from: kiwiol on July 08, 2011, 02:19:28 AM

All the top bodybuilding gyms are just a few blocks away

Kiwi is correct just add "of" between All __ the

Dr Dutch · « **Reply #9 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:47:04 AM »

"WITHIN a few blocks" is the most correct.

Papper · « **Reply #10 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:47:42 AM »

Thanks a lot!

But the sentence isn't to be restructured as it is one in a fixed context. I was only after the correct preposition for the start of this particular sentence.

I have come to the conclusion that it is both right to say

"Over a few blocks you'll find ..."

and

"Within a few block you'll find ..."

Papper · « **Reply #11 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:51:02 AM »

Quote from: dutchguy on July 08, 2011, 02:47:04 AM

"WITHIN a few blocks" is the most correct.

I think this is best for the context.

Thanks.

kiwiol · « **Reply #12 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:55:23 AM »

Just a few blocks away you'll find...

Papper · « **Reply #13 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:55:56 AM »

It's funny that I posted this in the correct section first, General Topics, but that place seems pretty desert.

Came to the realization that a lot of these Off Topic threads you see probably are posted here with full intent because it's simply better traffic and faster answers.

trapz101 · « **Reply #14 on:** July 08, 2011, 04:22:55 AM »

'follow me i'll show you the top bodybuilding gyms'

Swede! · « **Reply #15 on:** July 08, 2011, 04:25:08 AM »

Follow the smell of insecurity

w8m8 · « **Reply #16 on:** July 08, 2011, 04:41:08 AM »

Quote from: papercut on July 08, 2011, 02:47:42 AM

Thanks a lot!

But the sentence isn't to be restructured as it is one in a fixed context. I was only after the correct preposition for the start of this particular sentence.

I have come to the conclusion that it is both ARE right to say

"Over a few blocks you'll find ..."

and

"Within a few block you'll find ..."

Over is not correct .. over is a descriptor of height if you want to be totally accurate .. unless the gyms are "above" the blocks "WITHIN" is correct

Tre · « **Reply #17 on:** July 08, 2011, 06:24:45 AM »

'In a few blocks' would only be correct if the receiver was already traveling in that direction.

kreator · « **Reply #18 on:** July 08, 2011, 06:31:43 AM »

Quote from: kiwiol on July 08, 2011, 02:19:28 AM

All the top bodybuilding gyms are just a few blocks away.............and if you see average looking people walk into these gyms with two paper bags of groceries you remember that's it's only gay if you want it to be

fixed

Papper · « **Reply #19 on:** July 08, 2011, 06:38:18 AM »

Quote from: w8m8 on July 08, 2011, 04:41:08 AM

Over is not correct .. over is a descriptor of height if you want to be totally accurate .. unless the gyms are "above" the blocks "WITHIN" is correct

Yes. Thanks.

Cleanest Natural · « **Reply #20 on:** July 08, 2011, 12:38:23 PM »

Quote from: w8m8 on July 08, 2011, 04:41:08 AM

Over is not correct .. over is a descriptor of height if you want to be totally accurate .. unless the gyms are "above" the blocks "WITHIN" is correct

so "over there" describes height .. moroness

w8m8 · « **Reply #21 on:** July 08, 2011, 01:45:32 PM »

Quote from: Cleanest Natural on July 08, 2011, 12:38:23 PM

so "over there" describes height .. moroness

you no speeka da engrish so good

you be bettah to buy a speek and spell

tbombz · « **Reply #22 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:08:52 PM »

the gyms are a few blocks away

wes · « **Reply #23 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:43:21 PM »

The quick brown fox,jumped over the lazy dogs.

EKnight · « **Reply #24 on:** July 08, 2011, 02:45:04 PM »

Would start by making sure the grammar/rhetoric in your title is correct, as in "Your ass in this thread," not "you ass in this thread."

-EK