RR: "WAR IS BAD, IT MAKES ROBBY SAD!"
Editor: "Ok champ, let me just punch that up a little bit."

And you were very kind by reproducing Robbie's second draft right there. As I know you know, the first draft read like this:
"WAR BAD. IT MAK ROBY SAAD"
(Have to confess, I've taken a couple of pulls on a THC vape this evening, and when I read that quote above back to myself in a generic retard/Sloth voice, I pissed myself laughing! Had to pull myself together to finish this post legibly

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